Front page. (10 by 8 inch size.)

15 comments:

  1. Your front cover is creepy! I like it! Are you going to have your artist statement in the book or just let the pictures completely speak for themselves?

    -Sarah Whitfield

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  2. what is your layout size I really like where this is taking you.

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  3. I agree, I love the image for the front cover. I think the font you chose works well too. Your new images are definitely becoming stronger and go with what I think you're trying to achieve. Keep up the great work!

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  4. awesome cover! it's creepy and that's great! you might want to revisit your artist statement and header. i can't ready your statement and i think you meant to type "what's happening here" below that.

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  5. I agree. The mysterious cover is enough and doesn't give too much away. I like the two last photos posted.
    Creepy

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  6. The cover is AWESOME! I really like the photo you used for it! Are you putting your artist statement in the book? Keep up the great work! :D

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  7. the picture and the font are good. the size will work well because it will be small so you have to look close to see what is going on.

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  8. The pictures are definatly getting better. I like the black and white.. it goes great with the images!

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  9. Yes, the black and white works better for your photos. The cover works well. Are you going to include a statement?

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  10. The image for your cover is really good! I am having trouble reading your artist statement though. Will it be included in your book? I think your pictures are getting better and better each week! The newest ones are some of the best so far.

    Danielle

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  11. I love your front cover; you have done a really good job on it. It looks so mysterious and quite scary.

    --Nick Miller

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  12. The title is very commanding and invites us inside. Black and white photos are conducive with your goal. How about using some color for the title? Maybe lime green or bright aqua and feather the edges to give us that creepy feeling inside.

    Keep going!

    Elaine

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  13. Soung,

    OK--Love the cover image, but you need to make like 10 nore covers with the same image and different fonts in different places so we can make a better choice. You need to make more images too for the inside of the book, but know that with each new one they are getting so much stronger!

    Good Job!

    xoxo,
    Val

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  14. i love it! ur new images are working so well to get ur statement across. i think the cover image really encompasses ur idea and i think its a really strong composition. the only suggestion would be to maybe reduce the opacity of the title to blend a little more with pic. keep it up!

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