My strong point is about the feeling of horror.When people see my picture, i want to give them curiosity. what's going on here? That response is what i want to get.
Lets reword your statement a little bit. I still do not think you need one, but if you intend to use one, let me help you correct the grammar.
"This group of photographs was inspired my my desire to evoke curiosity in the viewer. I am interested in the place where the unknown and unanswered conjures emotions of fear and even horror. "
Seeing the front and back cover side to side with the text at the same level has me thinking it's a little bottom heavy but I'm sure it won't matter when it's actually printed on the book and you can't see more than one side at a time. :) It looks really good!
The front and back cover you have chosen work well together. I don't think you really need the artist statement in the book because the title of the book and then the words on the back cover tell what is going on in the pictures.
The one thing that I definitely took a licking to was your artist statement and how it was placed on top of the photo of the entrance to the cemetery. It reminds me of a scene from the original twilight zone TV show. Your photos are definitely getting more creepy and scarier versus when you first started.
I love your front and back photos! They make the viewer want to look inside for more. Forget the artist's statement. The images speak for themselves! You are almost there!
Hi Soung,
ReplyDeleteLets reword your statement a little bit. I still do not think you need one, but if you intend to use one, let me help you correct the grammar.
"This group of photographs was inspired my my desire to evoke curiosity in the viewer. I am interested in the place where the unknown and unanswered conjures emotions of fear and even horror. "
Better?
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Seeing the front and back cover side to side with the text at the same level has me thinking it's a little bottom heavy but I'm sure it won't matter when it's actually printed on the book and you can't see more than one side at a time. :) It looks really good!
ReplyDeleteThe front and back cover you have chosen work well together. I don't think you really need the artist statement in the book because the title of the book and then the words on the back cover tell what is going on in the pictures.
ReplyDeleteLooks great!
-Sarah
Yeah, I don't think the artist statement is needed. The images are looking great.
ReplyDeleteThe photos are looking great!! :D The cover looks really nice! I can't wait to see the final book!
ReplyDeletethe front and back covers are really good. i think the book should be just pictures
ReplyDeleteThe one thing that I definitely took a licking to was your artist statement and how it was placed on top of the photo of the entrance to the cemetery. It reminds me of a scene from the original twilight zone TV show. Your photos are definitely getting more creepy and scarier versus when you first started.
ReplyDelete--Nick Miller
I really like your new images and I agree that you don't need the artist statement in the book.
ReplyDeleteI love your front and back photos! They make the viewer want to look inside for more. Forget the artist's statement. The images speak for themselves! You are almost there!
ReplyDeleteElaine